Перевод рабочего сценария ПКМ-2, Для знатоков английского))) Опции

[Иришка]

Друзья, чтобы нам не путать коллективную работу по переводу с оригинальным сценарием и не переводить всем одно и то же, есть предложение - отмечать здесь, кто какие куски к переводу взял (от реплики до реплики), а уважаемые авторы будут периодически сообщать нам, какие места уже переведены (или еще не переведены), и корректировать нас.

К примеру, я сейчас беру себе кусок от реплики: "УИЛЛ: Хотите получить и Воробья, и Жемчужину?" до реплики: "(Рукой Гора - ребята, давайте, что ли, кракена испытаем, а то он не отвяжется)".

Прошу переводчиков разбирать остальное, а авторов - корректировать процесс...

[robin]

Я перевела тут кусочек. Нашла целесообразным выложить его сюда - может, кто ошибки найдет подправит. Одна голова хорошо, а несколько - лучше! (тем более нормального словаря под рукой нет)

Итак, сцена прихода к Тиа Далме:

WILL: Why is Jack afraid of the open ocean?
(Added by Johnny: according to the script Keira is hanging over here, on a merchant ship)
GIBBS: A fearsome creature with giant tentacles that suction your face clean off.
(Added by Hitchkok: Someone has stolen my new movie script!!!)
GIBBS: Imagine: The last thing you know on God's green earth is the roar of the Kraken, and the reeking odor of a thousand rotting corpses.
(Added by S.King: And my new book handwriting!!!)
WILL: And he believes in that, doesn’t he?
(Added by script writers: How he can not believe, if we have wrote it!)
(Added by Orlando: No sense to read that then…)
(Added by script writers: What? Don't forget, who's ruling the game – we'll force you to.. )
GIBBS: Bad enough even to go visit... *Her*.
(Added by Johnny: To her?!!)
(Added by Keira: To me?!!)
(Added by Davenport: Take you time, love, you have a rival)
(Added by Keira: WHAT?!!!)
(Added by script writers: Keira, angel of ours, don't worry! She's absolutely comistic!)
JACK: Tia Dalma and I go way back. Thick as thieves. Nigh inseparable we are. Were. Have been. Before.

(Added by Keira: Comistic you're saying? I'm gonna.. gonna… steal you boat!)
GIBBS: Mind the boat.
WILL: Mind the boat.
PINTEL: Mind the boat.
MARTY: Mind the boat.

(Added by Johnny: Where's my contact lenses? I have a poor eyesight without them)
(Added by script writers: You should showed off a little less!)
Jack enters Tia Dalma’s shack and stumbles across the hanging bottles.
(Added by Keira: Who cut off the scene with me fighting beautifully with dozen of pirates?!!)
TIA DALMA: Jack Sparrow!
(Added by Keira: I demand to bring it back! I have been training for the whole month to fight with dozen of pirates!)
(Added by Johnny: Your character is a Governer’s daughter, lady, softie! She could learn to fight like that even for the whooooole year, savvy?)

(Added by script writers: Johnny, don't got in a way - Keira's displaying her character! And think about Liza!!!)
(Added by Johnny: Give me your Kraken – I'm about to drown myself in him..)
(Added by Brukhaimer: If you don't blow something immediately, I'll do cut the budget!!!)
TIA DALMA: I always know de wind was goin' blow you back to me one day.
(Added by Orlando: lol, easy come – easy go)
TIA DALMA: You.
(Added by Orlando: I don't like the way she's looking at me.. Could it be, that she's a Liza's relative?)
TIA DALMA: You have a touch of... destiny about *you*

(Added by Orlando: Jesus, I knew…)
WILL TURNER: You know me?
TIA DALMA: You want to know *me*.
(Added by Orlando: SOS!!!)
JACK SPARROW: There'll be no knowing here.
(Added by Orlando: Ufff.. Thank you, Johnny! Draw her away, please)
Puts drawing of the key on the table.
JACK SPARROW: I thought *I* knew you.
TIA DALMA: Not so well as I had hoped.
(Added by Johnny: Let's make an agreement: you don't bother me and Orlie – Liza is quite enough)
TIA DALMA: You know I demand payment.
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